Things I'm changing:
* I'm editing the OCs personalities a little. I realized that there were somethings that just didn't make since.
* I'm changing the twins around so their personalilties match. So Rain will no longer be with Hikaru.
* The story wil be in third POV so you can still know what people are thinking without getting confused because it always say "I" and you aren't sure who "I" is.
* You'll understand the characters better, so instead of the random attitude change in Rain, you'll understand why she warms up to the twins so fast.
* There will be more of the twins and their relationships! Rain was really left out in the original (because her OC creater didn't read the stories and never made suggestions)
* My writing has changed so the story might change too.